Thesis Statement: Reliability what ı want my friend should have. Reason 1: Reliable friends are near you everytime. Example: If you have smt bad he or she is ready to help you.
Reason 2: You can share everything with your reliable friend.
Reason 3:You weigh the burden of life together with your reliable friend.
Reason against:However some peole don't think like this.They claim in frienship intelliget or humour is the most important think.
Refutation: When time comes to share some important things you can't share a friend who has humor or intelligence but hasn't got reliability.
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Your thesis statement is "Reliability what ı'm want my friend should have." Is there an objection to this statement? Is it an argument or is there anyone who objects to this? You should state that there are many characteristics but reliability is the most important one when compared to other two characteristics. You should mention this and its reasons in your thesis statement.
YanıtlaSilThink about the following sentence once more:
".They say they couldn't do nothing without humour or intelligence."
We do not say "They are wrong" or "They aren't right" when we are trying to refute opponents' views. You should write why they are insufficient, irrelevant, etc.
After you have modified your outline, you can start writing your paragraph.